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left unsaid

Knew it in moment this Wednesday though she left last Monday life turned, never to be the same now my heart knows how it feels to cherish now, what was then. Her days carried me on a breeze like a book that was never meant to be read only felt in rippled waves oh, to turn through those pages again. Our young song' thrilling plan traces left a forever mark on a boy where only envy's left to the man. Lesson one, don't be a jerk like me fill the pages with everything your heart has to give.. never regret the things you wished you'd done and all those wonderful words of love you left unsaid.

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Christina Bowring

Date: 5/16/2024 11:05:00 PM

This is such a wonderful poem. Love how you’ve written it with the comparison of a book. I especially love the lines, ‘ to cherish now, what was then’ ‘ oh to turn through those pages again’ and the last few lines. Regretful. Poignant. Reflective. Loved it. Thank you for sharing this thoughtful poem. :)

Curie Stark

Date: 5/1/2024 12:00:00 PM

And never break your heart twice,for the moment once gone,is gone for good.And in your heart you must know,there's no forever, time is misunderstood,.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/28/2024 10:00:00 PM

The deep thoughts of love and smart reference of a book to describe a lost romance gives this beautiful poem an innovative read. I like this poem.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/27/2024 5:16:00 AM

Awesome write, my friend. Echoes of memories haunt when things unsaid roil the thoughts and mind. ---Her days carried me on a breeze like a book that was never meant to be read only felt in rippled waves oh, to turn through those pages again--So very poetic! A FAVE!!