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Left Behind

As with the begging night, you tease engulfing me with a passioned kiss carried in through a vagrant breeze crimson drops of honey dipped pleasure pristine pure, mysterious bites scraping hushed scents of two lover's lips, flipped switches of oral intent where light flickers into the recesses of the mind, playing with the light and dark of moving shadows lusting after poetic lines left behind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/3/2018 9:55:00 PM
Intoxicating poem Tim! I love the visual aspect as well :) Have a great day
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Date: 2/1/2018 10:52:00 PM
I've come back to read this one a couple times, your last lines further unfurling with each read. Splendid piece Tim.
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/2/2018 10:06:00 AM
Thanks Mo
Date: 1/31/2018 1:30:00 PM
- Beautifully written about two lovers, Tim ... a little sad ending - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/30/2018 7:00:00 PM
A delightful read Tim :) Thanks for the smile and I love this piece <3 ... hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 1/30/2018 5:38:00 PM
Creatively written Tim and worth reading more than once :)
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Date: 1/30/2018 2:01:00 PM
luscious lines with a poignant finale...wonderful phrasing, tim.. huggs
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Date: 1/30/2018 1:29:00 PM
lovely and romantic imagery Tim but I did find the ending somewhat sad:-( hugs jan xx
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