Left Behind

As with the begging night, you tease engulfing me with a passioned kiss carried in through a vagrant breeze crimson drops of honey dipped pleasure pristine pure, mysterious bites scraping hushed scents of two lover's lips, flipped switches of oral intent where light flickers into the recesses of the mind, playing with the light and dark of moving shadows lusting after poetic lines left behind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Hagy Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 9:55 PM
Intoxicating poem Tim! I love the visual aspect as well :) Have a great day
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 10:52 PM
I've come back to read this one a couple times, your last lines further unfurling with each read. Splendid piece Tim.
Smith Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Thanks Mo
Andresen Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 1:30 PM
- Beautifully written about two lovers, Tim ... a little sad ending - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Downing  Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 7:00 PM
A delightful read Tim :) Thanks for the smile and I love this piece <3 ... hugs and smiles :)
Sands Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 5:38 PM
Creatively written Tim and worth reading more than once :)
Onclaud Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 2:01 PM
luscious lines with a poignant finale...wonderful phrasing, tim.. huggs
Allison Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 1:29 PM
lovely and romantic imagery Tim but I did find the ending somewhat sad:-( hugs jan xx
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