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Left Behind

Left behind.. The fire crackling.. Warmth ..... Comfort surrounded in pure coziness.. A kittens soft purr on a brisk cold winters day.... Left behind... Trees that were once bare.. Naked.. Beautifully grown into leaves.. Fragrant air .. As the flowers bloom.. In a colorful scenery.. Left behind.. The sweet scent of summer.. A summer sea breeze . The whiff of salt air.. While the waves of the sea.. Splash softly ... As serenity speaks with the reflection of the sun.. Left behind.. Rust, amber and gold.. Leaves falling from the trees. Indulging in vibrancy.. As the colors capture supreme lushisness.. Swept away from nature.. Followed by a crisp nip in the air.. Seasons may change.. Memories never change..

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/9/2019 3:23:00 AM

The way you have brought the love and truth of the seasons to the reader in poetic form is absolutely exquisite. Well done, Robertina. My muse Trixie and I are both clapping and cheering.

Robertina B.
Date: 7/10/2019 10:02:00 AM

Caren, I greatly appreciate your wonderful support.. I am so thrilled and honored that you enjoyed my poem.. Such lovely words, my friend.. Have a blessed day!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/8/2019 3:07:00 PM

I like the effective us of repetition. Also excellent imagery.

Robertina B.
Date: 7/10/2019 9:59:00 AM

Thank you so much for visiting, Richard.. Your kindness shines!! I really appreciate it.. Many blessings!!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/16/2019 10:22:00 AM

Wonderful, wondrous imagery, Robertina! Each season is so lovingly and sensually depicted. Love it! Peace and joy, Gershon

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/12/2019 4:02:00 PM

I enjoyed this descriptive walk through the seasons..and memories..so much to reflect in every verse, Robertina.