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Left Alone

If I disappeared tomorrow Would the weather change at all? If I flew to oblivion, Would the wind blow the other way? If I stay one more day, Will the sun come up still? If I stay any longer, Will I watch the red sea part? If we all left now, Would the moon disappear? If we forgot ourselves, Would belief ever forgive? One gone, two gone, We’ve all left now. The wind stops blowing, Then the sun stops setting, Belief is suspended. Who do they perform for now?

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Date: 12/12/2023 11:37:00 AM
This is a great thought provoking poem Ethan. Very well written. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. :)
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Date: 12/11/2023 4:17:00 AM
This is a very thoughtful well penned poem and I really enjoyed reading it, thank you for sharing have a precious day dear poet Congrats :)
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Ethan Klastaitas
Date: 12/11/2023 7:39:00 AM
Thanks a lot, a good day to you too!
Date: 12/10/2023 12:13:00 PM
Deep and emotive poem Ethan.. Congrats on your placement..
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Ethan Klastaitas
Date: 12/10/2023 7:00:00 PM
Thank you so much!

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