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Leery of Love

love, thy wanton ways and the mischief in thy eyes, i bemoan my fate: like a moth drawn to the flame like a fish biting the bait. Tanka 2 contest by Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 3/22/2015 1:57:00 PM
ABDUL, Congratulations on your awesome TANKA 2 win Always & Forever <3 Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/21/2015 9:37:00 PM
A bit humorous I thought. I enjoyed reading this one. I have to tell you. Please do not capitalize each line of your tanka and try to avoid words like "thy" (at least when I am the judge. haha) Congrats in my contest.
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