Lecten Spring Season

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NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

moving back&forth we each must find our way as bafflement becomes understanding then venture a leap in times of tension something is there a way to godliness as we face to face come to Thee memories in a sense of imagery from a floating vision in a search for meaning of the fallen state a stasis from salvation found measuring meaning identifying consequences breathless to discuss & explain where selfless love reigns affirmed in a communal walk

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