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Unrhymed tercets

Leaving You Each Breath Stunned

Casting out shadows 
the softest kiss lovingly 
Whispers warmly inside echoes 

Gentleness touching deeply brushes 
upon your soul clouds swiftly disappear 
Heartbeats sing to one true tune 

In a thousand dreams enchanting 
Sweet nightingale sparks 
star-blazing wishes alights 

Each a sparkle 
circling around diamonds forever 
Held always inside two gems Fluttering wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 5:49 PM
Utterly romantic.
Adams Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 6:19 PM
i think what i remember most about your poetry was the beauty you always shared within your words...this one was as i remember...great write...hugs
Andresen Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 4:53 PM
- Love this dear friend Liam - So touching beautiful - Best wishes for a lovely weekend for you and your loved ones - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sage Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 2:49 AM
the flow was good Liam, excellent write
Nyaga Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 7:05 PM
Liam..a most enchanting poem.. excellently delivered
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 6:01 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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