Leaving, Searching, Hoping

Ahead of us lies the unknown

The flatline horizon betrays

The beating heart of the ocean

Each beat causing a swell

Each swell causing us to sway

Out in the open, enclosed in the womb

Umbilically linked to our mother

Daily we reminisce of the island we left behind

The families that will live without us

The paths we will never walk again

We try to keep our thoughts on new paths

On stepping in the footprints of our ancestors

But darkness falls and fear reigns over us

Shrouding hope in a veil of obscurity

Will we fall into non-existence

Will we wish our existence to end

Damnable transient emotions

Ever dispelling our confidence

In the gloom hangs a twinkle of hope

Our hearts mirrored by the sky

Opening and showing us the way

A timeless voyage into our island universe

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Date: 5/28/2024 2:59:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/13/2016 9:20:00 AM
Peter, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/27/2015 7:19:00 AM
I know your Mom! She told me to check this out! You are one great writer of rhyme my friend! I'm really quite impressed... cheers!
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Peter And Shahla Nygaard
Date: 3/9/2015 11:37:00 AM
Thank you for the compliment. The poem was inspired while my wife and I were traveling in the Polynesian islands. We thought about how it would have felt for the warriors that set out into the open ocean in only a canoe and with no destination.
Date: 2/26/2015 11:39:00 PM
I think we all question the same one time or another.... Excellent free verse....Tim
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Peter And Shahla Nygaard
Date: 3/9/2015 11:38:00 AM
Thanks Tim. We did write this poem to be broad and encompassing.
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