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Leaving Sadness

You left me by the sea I could feel waves of sadness washing over me you left me by the fire I could feel hells sick desire you left me by a tree while its dead leaves hang over me leaving me only brings more misery so if you go don't turn back because the pain your leaving behind will last so go on go on fast while I slowly become part of the past

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/27/2011 9:04:00 AM
I hope to see the poem arranged with a few line breaks but very nice write. Enjoyed it.
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Ky Gatchell
Date: 6/28/2011 8:44:00 AM
thank you ill be sure to fix it

Book: Shattered Sighs