Leaving Sadness

You left me by the sea
I could feel waves of sadness
washing over me

you left me by the fire
I could feel hells sick desire

you left me by a tree
while its dead leaves hang over me
leaving me only brings
more misery

so if you go
don't turn back
because the pain
your leaving behind 
will last

so go on
go on fast
while I slowly become 
part of the past
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Longfall Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 9:04 AM
I hope to see the poem arranged with a few line breaks but very nice write. Enjoyed it.
Gatchell Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 8:44 AM
thank you ill be sure to fix it
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