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Leaving Me Soon

Fold away the fields, Watch spring blossom turn to ash. Nature gives, then steals. Our love padlocked to a bridge Will endure beyond death's crash

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/30/2014 6:41:00 PM
An outstanding tanka!! Tankajournal.com needs new submissions just in case you'll be inteterested.Just received an email from their director about two weeks ago..Guess its still open for more.
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Date: 9/30/2014 5:58:00 PM
fabulous Tanka I especially love the lines Watch spring blossom turn to ash. Nature gives, then steals. - great imagery. Hugs jan xxx
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