Leaving Me Soon

Fold away the fields,
Watch spring blossom turn to ash.
Nature gives, then steals.
Our love padlocked to a bridge
Will endure beyond death's crash
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chircop Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 6:41 PM
An outstanding tanka!! Tankajournal.com needs new submissions just in case you'll be inteterested.Just received an email from their director about two weeks ago..Guess its still open for more.
Allison Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 5:58 PM
fabulous Tanka I especially love the lines Watch spring blossom turn to ash. Nature gives, then steals. - great imagery. Hugs jan xxx
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