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Leaving Is Such a Trivial Thing

Leaving is such a trivial thing You call it injustice, wont stand for it Departure imminent. Your daily bits and bytes No longer. What will be left of you Some ghosts in a search engine? Empty emotion, empty spaces Zapped wisdom, but maybe the spirit Remains Well, leaving is such a trivial thing One byte away, one click Your soul and spirit, Words and critique, Hard truths, left in limbo

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Silent One

Date: 9/16/2017 4:47:00 PM

Excellent

Marugu Mo
Date: 3/6/2024 10:54:00 PM

Thank you

John Leong

Date: 9/16/2017 10:26:00 AM

nice! i felt like in a short movie where the romance lingers on even after we're gone. well written and i enjoyed myself! cheers!

Marugu Mo
Date: 3/6/2024 10:56:00 PM

Thanks

Suzette Campbell

Date: 9/16/2017 4:21:00 AM

Love it, always thought like this when people leave us but they leave social media behind, nice write

Marugu Mo
Date: 3/6/2024 10:56:00 PM

Social media pages become static with no content from them save for visitors...its like a haunted page

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/29/2017 8:02:00 AM

Hello again :)

Marugu Mo
Date: 3/6/2024 10:56:00 PM

Hello!

Darren White

Date: 6/29/2017 3:24:00 AM

I only want to say: welcome back :)

Marugu Mo
Date: 6/29/2017 7:09:00 AM

Thanks Darren

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/28/2017 10:09:00 AM

I suppose that would all depend on who is leaving, would it not? Now if you were to leave, that would not be a trivial thing. Do you know, that I still think about the poem you wrote about taking a trip with your son and the way you described the highway as a black snake. I haven't forgotten that. This poem is sad to me, Marugu.

Marugu Mo
Date: 6/29/2017 7:09:00 AM

Hi DT. I am surprised you remember that poem. Thanks for the comment. I actually deleted my account, just created a new one