Leaving Ireland

When the train jolted 
The rain and street lights melted.
Your finger traced sighs
Against the breath-fogged windows.
Love fades like peat fire embers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 11:29 PM
wow,one of the best ones I have read tonight. Short and sweet and original.
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