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Leaving Her Behind

She reached for you even when you were no where to be found waiting for your unconditional love like merry go round Same blood running through each others veins she was conceived through a passion igniting a flame A father is supposed to show her the way instead you left her Astray For a piece of her will always be missing wondering why unremitting When you left she will never understand why to young to remember the reason for goodbye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/21/2017 12:59:00 PM
A touching poem. Not all men are meant to be fathers and neither are all women meant to be mothers . . . and some of them they realize it too late. It so unfair and hurtful for the children left behind. Amitiés
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Sofia Ra
Date: 3/21/2017 1:10:00 PM
yes you are write, some people shouldn't be parents. Thank you for commenting. looking at your poetry very beautiful
Date: 3/21/2017 11:47:00 AM
This one touched my heart in a sad way. To a father, his daughter should always be his most priceless gift. I do not understand how people can just walk away. It would just destroy me.
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Date: 3/21/2017 11:52:00 AM
It is scar a child will always have, never fully comprehending the reasoning. Because in truth there is never a reason for it. Thank you for your comment.
Date: 3/21/2017 11:39:00 AM
I can never understand how a father can leave a child behind. I will always be there for my kids...lovely
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Sofia Ra
Date: 3/21/2017 11:41:00 AM
neither can I, A bond that is supposed to be unbreakable

Book: Shattered Sighs