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Leaving

Shades of orange shift In the distance as I gape - A passing train drapes my sight. A grey skyline looms I am thinking what’s better A quick goodbye or nothing. 9.28.14

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Date: 11/3/2014 12:48:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your Sedoka..Very interesting topic..Thanks for your visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/2/2014 7:31:00 AM
thank you, liam!
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Date: 9/29/2014 9:50:00 AM
beautifully deep painted vision
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Date: 10/2/2014 7:32:00 AM
thank you, liam

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