Leaving

Shades of orange shift
In the distance as I gape -
A passing train drapes my sight.

A grey skyline looms
I am thinking what’s better
A quick goodbye or nothing.

9.28.14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 12:48 PM
Enjoyed reading your Sedoka..Very interesting topic..Thanks for your visits to my page..Sara
De La Luna Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 7:31 AM
thank you, liam!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 9:50 AM
beautifully deep painted vision
De La Luna Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 7:32 AM
thank you, liam
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