Leaves With Love

LEAVES WITH LOVE Better die with dignity in the fierce battle fighting like brave-heart Than befriend with foes and back stab to live like machine’s cog or caged parrot When the fetter is making my torn limbs numb With wily smile, dragging me Push they to guillotine Echoing from lofty mountains my roar reached crescendo silencing the thunder- You bloody cowards luring few of my own men have captured me by treason How treacherous and shameful! Deceitful victory is a celebration’s reason? Bleeding tears fail to douse my fury’s inferno against my betraying men no wonder When blade ripped my neck flowed my blood and loyalists' tears Soul wished this flow cleansed Double game and breach of trust Leaves with love, praise and blessings
Date: 08-09-2016 Contest Name: Challenge- write one
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 2:58 PM
Congrats in the contest of Broken Wings. A very interesting interpretation. Creative!
Nayak Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 2:55 AM
Dear Andrea , thank you for your appreciative words, wishes and visit:-) glad you liked my poem:)//love, Anu:)
Sathasivam Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 4:01 AM
Excellent. So deep write. Congrats on your placement. Thanks for sharing it.
Nayak Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 2:54 PM
thank you very much Ravi for your words and wishes, Anu:)
La France Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Anulaxmi, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem ~
Nayak Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 12:20 PM
Thank you so very much dear Broken Wings for your wishes :) This win made me happy:) Love, Anu:)
Scars Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Anulaxmi, wow, so deep....congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
Nayak Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 8:13 AM
Thank you so much dear Laura:)
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