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Leaves Talking

Their kisses are deep and gentle; their embrace is magnetic and divine; their souls are free and connected. They are from different worlds; different civilizations; their souls though, know each other very well. Leaves of different colors, types, and sizes dance in synchronized spiral around the lovers. The leaves dance in silence and rhythm, as though they have mastered the heartbeat of the lovers. Love is the most powerful thing in the Universe. It's only love that can bring people of different worlds together. It's only love that can make anything to dance to its rhythm, even the leaves in a windless Autumn.... Date: 9/15/2016

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Date: 9/18/2016 10:37:00 PM
Teddy congratulations on your wonderful placement!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/19/2016 7:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie!! *^_^*
Date: 9/18/2016 7:33:00 PM
Teddy, I also liked the metaphoric comparisons and contrast Kim touched upon. Love the visual of the leaves dancing in a windless Autumn. Thanks for participating in the contest.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/19/2016 7:24:00 AM
You are very welcome, John!! ;-) Thank you for enjoying my piece, and placing it in your winners' list!! :-)
Date: 9/18/2016 7:28:00 PM
Comparisons and contrasts. Great! Congratulations!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/19/2016 7:13:00 AM
Thank you Kim, for enjoying and applauding my work!! *^_^*
Date: 9/18/2016 7:28:00 PM
Congratulations Teddy on the placement of the contest
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/19/2016 7:02:00 AM
Tank you so much for your applause, Nayda!! *^_^*
Date: 9/16/2016 2:22:00 PM
I love your metaphoric entry Teddy. Love does indeed make the world go round. Your words hold such a wise and compassionate message. Beautiful! : ) 7
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/17/2016 2:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie, for complimenting and enjoying my piece!! *^_^*
Date: 9/15/2016 4:25:00 PM
love is a very powerful tool to change the lives of everyone if they allow us to us it and if they are compassionate enough to accept. Teddy good words of wisdom. Hugs
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/16/2016 7:51:00 AM
Thank you so much for enjoying my work, Eve!! *^_^*
Date: 9/15/2016 4:20:00 PM
beautifully written, teddy.. yes, love conquers all; wow..huggs
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/16/2016 7:49:00 AM
Amen to that, Nette!! Thank you so much for enjoying my piece!! *^_^*
Date: 9/15/2016 4:56:00 AM
Beautiful leaves of love ... A lovely impression ...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/15/2016 4:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Probir!! :-)

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