Leaves of Red and Gold

Leaves dance in the wind
Slowly turning red and gold
Fall takes summers' place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 3:46 AM
Congratulations on placing 2nd in Brian’s Images of Fall contest with this wonderful haiku. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J
Richards Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 8:15 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful winning poem! ~ Carrie
Jordan Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 4:28 AM
Vernette congratulations on placing in Brian's contest - God Bless. mj
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August 28, 2009 at 5:56 PM
Congratulations on your second place finish in the contest. Good use of imagery for a creative view. Keep on writing. Karen
Augustus Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 12:55 PM
Congratulations on your second place win!
Golden Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 11:33 AM
Lovely, Vernette! You so perfectly describe the sight and mood f the season. Congratulations on your success in Brian's contest! Donna
Gorelick Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 6:38 AM
Way to go! congrats. BG
Brown Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win Vernette. Love,Carol
Strand Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 1:21 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Vernette.Rgds Brian .My latest contest Hymn of Harvest is now opened
Brown Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 5:41 AM
~~Vernette~~ Fantastic seeing you here writing again. Awesome Haiku. Best of luck in the contest. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 1:33 AM
Thank you for supporting my contests Vernette.Rgds Brian
Kendrick Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 4:43 PM
Very descriptive. I can see and feel the place. Keep writing. Sara
Knox Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 4:42 PM
a great picture i see here :)
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