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Leaves Dream

see dreams of my zestful youth in soaring, swirling, swooshing, floating leaves

                                     beauty in decay 
                        leaves drift around, leaves flutter 
                                  nature's decoupage 

                 red, magenta, amber, crimson-hued leaves,
        few dejected sprawled on ground summer's dreams weave!
               senses tantalized with riot of colours on trees,
               delightful roses still beaming in golden breeze ~



                                       June 11, 2023
             A Monoku, a Haiku, 4 lines of Rhyme Poetry Contest
                                 Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
                           Syllables checked by HMS.com
                       Rhymes checked by rhyme zone.com
                                         FIRST PLACE

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Krish Radhakrishna Date: 6/18/2023 2:13:00 AM beautiful poem! congrats on your win!! Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/18/2023 4:02:00 AM Thank you, Krish. Your comments are precious!

Michael Tor Date: 6/14/2023 3:06:00 PM Lovely imagery in your words Mala creating hues in one's mind of beauty. Well done my Dear... Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/14/2023 4:21:00 PM Thank you, Dear Michael. I really appreciate your kind and thoughtful words.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/13/2023 12:40:00 PM Great alliteration and description, Mala. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/14/2023 4:20:00 PM Thanks, Dear Andrea. Really appreciate your inspiring comment and congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2023 2:19:00 AM - Congratulations Mala ... on your lovely poem in the contest, by Tania Kitchin - hugs Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/14/2023 4:19:00 PM Thank you, Dear Anne-Lise. Your comment is so precious!

Tania Kitchin Date: 6/12/2023 3:30:00 PM Mala, a gorgeous set of poems, congratulations on your first place win! Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/12/2023 3:57:00 PM Thanks, Tania. I feel honoured!

Vijay Pandit Date: 6/12/2023 10:50:00 AM A splendid combo of three forms, Mala. Beautiful images throughout blooming like the flowers your poem speaks of. Best to you. Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/12/2023 2:47:00 PM Thank you, Dear Vijay. So delighted to know you have enjoyed! I feel assured. BW ~ Mala