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Leaves Dream

see dreams of my zestful youth in soaring, swirling, swooshing, floating leaves beauty in decay leaves drift around, leaves flutter nature's decoupage red, magenta, amber, crimson-hued leaves, few dejected sprawled on ground summer's dreams weave! senses tantalized with riot of colours on trees, delightful roses still beaming in golden breeze ~ June 11, 2023 A Monoku, a Haiku, 4 lines of Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Syllables checked by HMS.com Rhymes checked by rhyme zone.com FIRST PLACE

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Date: 6/18/2023 2:13:00 AM
beautiful poem! congrats on your win!!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/18/2023 4:02:00 AM
Thank you, Krish. Your comments are precious!
Date: 6/14/2023 3:06:00 PM
Lovely imagery in your words Mala creating hues in one's mind of beauty. Well done my Dear...
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/14/2023 4:21:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Michael. I really appreciate your kind and thoughtful words.
Date: 6/13/2023 12:40:00 PM
Great alliteration and description, Mala. Congrats on your win.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/14/2023 4:20:00 PM
Thanks, Dear Andrea. Really appreciate your inspiring comment and congrats.
Date: 6/13/2023 2:19:00 AM
- Congratulations Mala ... on your lovely poem in the contest, by Tania Kitchin - hugs
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/14/2023 4:19:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Anne-Lise. Your comment is so precious!
Date: 6/12/2023 3:30:00 PM
Mala, a gorgeous set of poems, congratulations on your first place win!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/12/2023 3:57:00 PM
Thanks, Tania. I feel honoured!
Date: 6/12/2023 10:50:00 AM
A splendid combo of three forms, Mala. Beautiful images throughout blooming like the flowers your poem speaks of. Best to you.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/12/2023 2:47:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Vijay. So delighted to know you have enjoyed! I feel assured. BW ~ Mala

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