Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Other

Leaves Dream

see dreams of my zestful youth in soaring, swirling, swooshing, floating leaves

                                     beauty in decay 
                        leaves drift around, leaves flutter 
                                  nature's decoupage 

                 red, magenta, amber, crimson-hued leaves,
        few dejected sprawled on ground summer's dreams weave!
               senses tantalized with riot of colours on trees,
               delightful roses still beaming in golden breeze ~



                                       June 11, 2023
             A Monoku, a Haiku, 4 lines of Rhyme Poetry Contest
                                 Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
                           Syllables checked by HMS.com
                       Rhymes checked by rhyme zone.com
                                         FIRST PLACE

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Krish Radhakrishna June 18, 2023 at 2:13 AM beautiful poem! congrats on your win!! Malabika Ray Choudhury June 18, 2023 at 4:02 AM Thank you, Krish. Your comments are precious!

Michael Tor June 14, 2023 at 3:06 PM Lovely imagery in your words Mala creating hues in one's mind of beauty. Well done my Dear... Malabika Ray Choudhury June 14, 2023 at 4:21 PM Thank you, Dear Michael. I really appreciate your kind and thoughtful words.

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2023 at 12:40 PM Great alliteration and description, Mala. Congrats on your win. Malabika Ray Choudhury June 14, 2023 at 4:20 PM Thanks, Dear Andrea. Really appreciate your inspiring comment and congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2023 at 2:19 AM - Congratulations Mala ... on your lovely poem in the contest, by Tania Kitchin - hugs Malabika Ray Choudhury June 14, 2023 at 4:19 PM Thank you, Dear Anne-Lise. Your comment is so precious!

Tania Kitchin June 12, 2023 at 3:30 PM Mala, a gorgeous set of poems, congratulations on your first place win! Malabika Ray Choudhury June 12, 2023 at 3:57 PM Thanks, Tania. I feel honoured!

Vijay Pandit June 12, 2023 at 10:50 AM A splendid combo of three forms, Mala. Beautiful images throughout blooming like the flowers your poem speaks of. Best to you. Malabika Ray Choudhury June 12, 2023 at 2:47 PM Thank you, Dear Vijay. So delighted to know you have enjoyed! I feel assured. BW ~ Mala