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Came the wind
On the mountain
Leaves started falling
Off branches
Red orange butterflies
Sailing on wings
Of wind
Fluttering specks
Falling on mother’s lap
Asleep for the 
Long
Long winter

 

Came the wind On the mountain Leaves started falling Off branches Red orange butterflies Sailing on wings Of wind Fluttering specks Falling on mother’s lap Asleep for the Long Long winter First Place Winner- Brian Strand-All Yours-2/22/21 Third Place: Brian Strand- September-9/14/17

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Date: 2/24/2021 12:12:00 PM
I really like this winner. Creative ..Congrats. Sara
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Date: 2/23/2021 3:18:00 PM
France, a pretty poem, I love it and congratulations on your win _Constance
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Date: 2/23/2021 6:50:00 AM
Lovely, Frances. Beautiful metaphors ~ congrats on your well deserved win
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Date: 9/14/2017 6:38:00 PM
Beautiful piece, Frances, and a well-deserved win - blessings and congrats, my friend! :-)
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Date: 9/6/2017 8:39:00 AM
Well written Frances..
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