Notes About The Poem

Came the wind
On the mountain
Leaves started falling
Off branches
Red orange butterflies
Sailing on wings
Of wind
Fluttering specks
Falling on mother’s lap
Asleep for the 
Long
Long winter

 

Leaves

Came the wind
On the mountain
Leaves started falling
Off branches
Red orange butterflies
Sailing on wings
Of wind
Fluttering specks
Falling on mother’s lap
Asleep for the 
Long
Long winter

First Place Winner- Brian Strand-All Yours-2/22/21
Third Place: Brian Strand- September-9/14/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kendrick Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 12:12 PM
I really like this winner. Creative ..Congrats. Sara
La France Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 3:18 PM
France, a pretty poem, I love it and congratulations on your win _Constance
Gauthier Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 6:50 AM
Lovely, Frances. Beautiful metaphors ~ congrats on your well deserved win
Barden Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 6:38 PM
Beautiful piece, Frances, and a well-deserved win - blessings and congrats, my friend! :-)
One Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Well written Frances..
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