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Leaves

Leaves See the leaf caught in the gale On freedoms wind away does sail Departed now, from the twigs How brief, their existence is Some are trapped within a rut Some stick together in a glut Some spend their days all alone Others drift where they are blown Some are destined to fly high Some watch others passing by Some stay firmly on the ground Others just whirl round and round Some are blown far away Some near home, they will stay Some from place to place do flutter Others remain, in the gutter Some find themselves on top of pile Their purchase there is so fragile Held aloft from underneath By the strong and humblest leaf Relying so on game of chance Upon the breeze perform their dance Everywhere the leaves are scattered Along the way are torn and tattered And when their journey comes to end Back with the earth the leaves do blend Making way for those to come The colourful, glorious, Next Autumn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/22/2013 7:38:00 PM
I'm of the dry and withering sort, so no discourse for me. Lovely analogies in here, Richard. Great write, as is your wont. Licia :-)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 8/6/2013 5:47:00 PM
You my dear friend are far from dry, particularly after a few drinks with ice if memory serves lol, nor are you withering, more like growing stronger on the vine, especially in your writing talents. Is that enough discourse for you :)
Date: 6/24/2013 7:28:00 AM
Good morning Richard.
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/27/2013 6:13:00 PM
And Good morning to you Rick. Belatedly lol
Date: 6/22/2013 4:33:00 PM
Richard; How beautiful The leaves, how beautiful the poem. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/22/2013 6:22:00 PM
Always nice to see you Lucy, thank you for looking in, hope you're feeling stronger
Date: 6/22/2013 2:17:00 PM
Lovely feeling the whirling and blowing of the leaves throughout this serene poem. Really like where it ended. Captivating all the way through :)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/22/2013 6:19:00 PM
I've been trying to figure where I might fit into this write, seems like a little in each, except the last one lol, not quite yet eh. Thanks for dropping by Karen
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 6/22/2013 2:20:00 PM
Meant to include that I did get the feeling the leaves as a metaphor for going about life. Very creative all the way through.
Date: 6/21/2013 12:59:00 AM
Sorry that I haven't gotten back with you in awhile. I develop into a workaholic during the summer... lol. Your descriptions of the leaves are fascinating... I've always thought it strange how the leaves are always so much more beautiful when they are dead, dry and just fluttering around as they may... Autumn definitely is glorious :)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/22/2013 6:07:00 PM
Hiya Tim, Welcome back, probably temp as you're so busy
Date: 6/19/2013 9:38:00 PM
Hello Richard, a beautiful poem, and lovely scenery, I love the image of leaves laying all around. Since I'm from Texas, I will admire the vivid view in your poem. Our Autumn, is not as fascinating when it comes to colors. sometimes when the leaves fall and settle upon the Earth, we rake them so quick you won't know they touched the ground.. our dry leaves are not attractive. I wish our leaves would journey in this manner, making way for seasons to come.... xox~ Linda
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/20/2013 11:03:00 AM
Thank you my Sweet Dark Friend, you always leave an interesting comment, which is much appreciated
Date: 6/19/2013 9:19:00 PM
i don't know why but I feel like raking all of a sudden... ha ha ...JK....
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/20/2013 10:59:00 AM
I hope that's leaves you mean and not the past lol
Date: 6/19/2013 7:04:00 PM
Good night Rick, I hope all is well in your world.
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/20/2013 10:58:00 AM
Thank you Rick, all is well in my world,
Date: 6/18/2013 5:49:00 PM
an incredible write with a sense of passing seasons beautifully penned Shadow x Smiles
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/18/2013 6:00:00 PM
Hi Linda, Thank you for the visit and lovely comment :)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/18/2013 5:58:00 PM
Lol I'm sure this happens when others are commenting at same time, below was meant to go to Andrea.
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/18/2013 5:56:00 PM
Thank you for your comment on this poem Andrea, yes I think that's the word, I'm sure an allergy is something quite different lol. Thank you also for your comment on my comments. It's a bit of fun.
Date: 6/18/2013 12:29:00 AM
this is VERY good analogy, I think that is the word for it!! People as leaves. So clever!! And I have to tell you that I really loved your comments to me today. They were so colorful!
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/18/2013 5:58:00 PM
Thank you for your comment on this poem Andrea, yes I think that's the word, I'm sure an allergy is something quite different lol. Thank you also for your comment on my comments. It's a bit of fun.
Date: 6/17/2013 7:49:00 AM
This is fantastic Richard, I enjoyed your poem.
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/18/2013 5:49:00 PM
Thank you Rick, appreciate you comment
Date: 6/17/2013 4:15:00 AM
- A poem for reflection Richard. - That's life "round trip" for both nature and people. - Really a nice poem! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/18/2013 5:48:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise, Yes and like 'round trip', very nice way of putting it.
Date: 6/15/2013 12:49:00 PM
nicely done Richard ;}
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/16/2013 9:07:00 AM
Thank you Debbie. Will be visting you again soon
Date: 6/14/2013 6:39:00 PM
Awwwwwwwww......what lessons are there for us to glean fron this exquisite poem....life is transitory...loved this. To my favs with it....
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/15/2013 2:13:00 AM
I will leave you to make of it what you will. Yes Eileen, life comes and goes and in between many things can happen. Thank you for your lovely comment.,

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