Leaves

Leaves, see how they sway Colorful, beautiful, leaves Oh how I want to come play As I see you bounce Before my eyes you do change Your color even your shape Yes I'm hypnotized I see you dance in the wind Till you stop, fall at my feet Then you're up again Ole' man wind blows you away I love the leaves, how they sway

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John Freeman

Date: 10/13/2011 2:24:00 PM

Vlerie, A worthy entry, congratulations, Agpe, Moses

Valerie Sherman
Date: 10/13/2011 2:34:00 PM

Thank you John..I appreciate it.

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/12/2011 2:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Nice to see such variations on the theme. Well done. Lee

Valerie Sherman
Date: 10/12/2011 2:56:00 PM

Thank you Lee..I appreciate it..comments encourage me..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/12/2011 12:01:00 PM

Congrats Valerie on a wonderful win with this lovely composition on leaves for the contest ..amazing imagery luv..

Valerie Sherman
Date: 10/12/2011 12:04:00 PM

thank you..i appreciate it.

Bob Quigley

Date: 10/12/2011 10:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Valerie

Valerie Sherman
Date: 10/12/2011 10:42:00 AM

Thank you Bob. I really appreciate the congrats!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/12/2011 8:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in my contest "Leaves Leaves Leaves" judged today 10/12/2011. Thank you for your support of my contest Valerie. Love, Carol

Valerie Sherman
Date: 10/12/2011 9:44:00 AM

Thank you Carol...this means an awful lot to me.

Date: 10/5/2011 9:26:00 PM

A waste of my time...only old ladies write like this.. please..next poem keep writing

Valerie Sherman
Date: 10/12/2011 9:47:00 AM

What is the name of your Published Poetry Book?