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9/18/2025 for YOUR CHOICE HAIKU Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

leaves

green, yellow, and red
angled planes catch the sunlight 
dancing in the breeze

lightsuntreewindhaiku

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Kahlani Steele

September 20, 2025 at 8:00 PM

I love the movement depicted in your autumn haiku. "Angled planes" is brilliant. Congratulations, David.

David Crandall

September 20, 2025 at 8:51 PM

Thanks Kahlani!

Andrea Dietrich

September 20, 2025 at 8:55 AM

Lovely images. Big congrats, David

David Crandall

September 20, 2025 at 4:32 PM

Thanks, Andrea :-)

Dr. Vandana Sharma

September 20, 2025 at 7:06 AM

A palate of autumn ! Congratulations.

David Crandall

September 20, 2025 at 4:32 PM

Thanks Vandana!

Danny Derden

September 20, 2025 at 5:47 AM

Vibrant. The haiku paints autumn’s palette in motion, where color and light pirouette through crisp air with effortless grace.

David Crandall

September 20, 2025 at 4:31 PM

Thanks, Danny - your comment is better than my poem :-))

Terry Miller

September 20, 2025 at 3:39 AM

Good one David, congratulations

David Crandall

September 20, 2025 at 4:31 PM

Thanks, Terry!

sara Etgen-Baker

September 19, 2025 at 3:31 PM

like the imagery 'angled planes'--hadn't ever thought of that before. well done

David Crandall

September 20, 2025 at 4:31 PM

Glad you liked it Sara, have a great evening!

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