Leaves

LEAVES are stirred by the breeze. Their morning jig, Quite mesmerizing. And round and round they go! "Leaves surrender to Autumn breeze." Pyramids Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May Date written: 06/11/2022

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Fj Thomas

Date: 6/25/2022 7:01:00 PM

They can capture the imagination can they not... I enjoy peaceful pieces :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/26/2022 8:06:00 PM

Thanks so much for the visit, FJ:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/11/2022 12:58:00 PM

I see the autumn leaves whirling--well invoked imagery.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/11/2022 4:34:00 PM

Thank you very much as always, Vijay:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/11/2022 11:10:00 AM

Hello Edward, this wonderful. It will be my fav. Blessings my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/12/2022 10:35:00 AM

Hello Edward, this poem deserves a fav. Blessing my friend.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/11/2022 4:34:00 PM

Thanks so very much, Darlene:-) I appreciate the fave, my friend.

Jenna Logan

Date: 6/11/2022 11:10:00 AM

This is a very well written pyramid, Edward!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/11/2022 4:33:00 PM

Thank you very much, Jenna:-)