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Within these corridors of time Our works are carved in stone. We do not view for judgment; That task is God’s alone. They serve as a reminder Of conditions that we share, The frailties of the human heart, The longing and despair. Grievous crimes are scattered here, How inhuman we can be. Such murdering and suffering Throughout our history. Yet portions of the hallway By far out shine the rest. Within we find the evidence Of mankind at his best. There are those who search and labor To ease the pain and strife, Looking for solutions To improve our way of life. And others, always giving Of their treasures toil and time, Holding out a helping hand To everyone they find. To those of you who hear my voice Your works put to the test. Something here you have to leave; Be sure it is your best.

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Date: 2/13/2023 3:42:00 PM
A message that everyone should read and think about. One of your lines reminds me of a verse I once wrote: Lord, invade every part, Of this poor, weak, human heart. A Scripture verse just now came to me: "He knows our frame, that we are dust." How true it is that, of our own selves we can do nothing, but that, through Him, we can do all things that He asks of us.
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J. Summers
Date: 2/14/2023 4:23:00 PM
Thanks Arlene for reading and for the thoughtful comments. John
Date: 3/7/2021 7:35:00 AM
What a great message and aspirational piece. ;0)
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Date: 1/9/2021 11:19:00 PM
Beautiful message to leave our best. Thank you for sharing with us. -C
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J. Summers
Date: 1/10/2021 2:51:00 PM
Thank you for reading, I’m looking forward to reading your work.
Date: 1/9/2021 8:02:00 PM
Well penned, J ~
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J. Summers
Date: 1/10/2021 9:25:00 PM
Thanks so much Line, your time to read is appreciated.
Date: 1/8/2021 10:05:00 AM
Of world at their best. Perfectly agree. https://www.poetrysoup.com/poets/top_100_poets_most_poems_all_time.aspx My over 8,000 poems can be found here.
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J. Summers
Date: 1/9/2021 12:54:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting James. Have a good day.
Date: 12/22/2020 11:38:00 PM
Brilliant,if we all gave our best.this world would be a better place. Hope you and your family have a wonderful Christmas.take care j summers. Simon
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J. Summers
Date: 12/23/2020 8:49:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Simon, glad you liked it. Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Date: 11/27/2020 6:49:00 PM
wow, this is one of the best poems I read tonight. FAVE!!
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J. Summers
Date: 11/30/2020 9:23:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, I appreciate your comments.
Date: 11/26/2020 7:12:00 PM
I really like the uplifting message here... And it uplifts both the person who does his/her best and those who are affected by that 'best.' Inspirational! Light and Joy, Gershon
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J. Summers
Date: 11/30/2020 9:23:00 AM
Thank you, I appreciate your remarks.
Date: 11/26/2020 12:16:00 AM
I agree too J, always do your best, give some help where’re you can, that’s our daily quest. Well written, Belle
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J. Summers
Date: 11/26/2020 5:41:00 PM
Happy T Day. Thanks for coming by.
Date: 11/15/2020 6:08:00 PM
Indeed, J. Be sure to leave your best. Enlightenment pours forth from your golden pen. Beautiful and hopeful poetry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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J. Summers
Date: 11/19/2020 2:22:00 PM
Thank you for reading.
Date: 11/13/2020 7:28:00 AM
I agree.. always leave the best..
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J. Summers
Date: 11/19/2020 2:23:00 PM
Hello, SO, thanks for the comment.

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