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Leave Me Not

leaves golden amber burgundy
wants to stay around
just a little longer

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

November 1, 2008 at 7:02 PM

Brrrr! Winter is coming. Vince

Sue Mason

October 31, 2008 at 9:50 PM

Love the title ... wonderful use of this form! You've really been busy the last couple of days with your writing!! Glad you're at the Soup!

Michael Jordan

October 29, 2008 at 8:44 PM

Deneen I reckon so - Great Haiku - Thank you Deneen for all the wonderful comments and please don't ever worry I have the Lord, my Wife and Children so I'll be fine - I just have to write it out of me sometimes - I love your heart - God Bless

Lena W

October 29, 2008 at 3:54 PM

I just love the fall and its change of season, you put this so vividly.

Mohammad Yamin

October 29, 2008 at 1:12 PM

Most beautiful Haiku -expressive of sentiments of autumn struck leaves or may be of an aging person. I would wish you to read my poem The Frost-bitten Leaf. Thanks for your generous comments on my Haiku Profound Verses.

Christopher Higgins

October 29, 2008 at 7:38 AM

But their time is up. Mr. cold is here. Great job Deneen of painting a clear picture.

Sharon Winter

October 29, 2008 at 5:49 AM

Yes, gorgeous. If only they could stay longer. Love, Shar

Daver Austin

October 29, 2008 at 4:48 AM

Colorful image, Deneen. Haiku is so sensitive. Love, daver

P Sheart

October 28, 2008 at 9:22 PM

Deneen A beautiful fall embrace that doesn't want to let go.... Seasons seems to come and go so fast don't they! Maybe it's because I'm getting older ha! Take care hun Love Light Truth Patricia