Leave Me Not

leaves golden amber burgundy
wants to stay around
just a little longer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 11/1/2008 7:02:00 PM
Brrrr! Winter is coming. Vince
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Date: 10/31/2008 9:50:00 PM
Love the title ... wonderful use of this form! You've really been busy the last couple of days with your writing!! Glad you're at the Soup!
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Date: 10/29/2008 8:44:00 PM
Deneen I reckon so - Great Haiku - Thank you Deneen for all the wonderful comments and please don't ever worry I have the Lord, my Wife and Children so I'll be fine - I just have to write it out of me sometimes - I love your heart - God Bless
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Date: 10/29/2008 3:54:00 PM
I just love the fall and its change of season, you put this so vividly.
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Date: 10/29/2008 1:12:00 PM
Most beautiful Haiku -expressive of sentiments of autumn struck leaves or may be of an aging person. I would wish you to read my poem The Frost-bitten Leaf. Thanks for your generous comments on my Haiku Profound Verses.
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Date: 10/29/2008 7:38:00 AM
But their time is up. Mr. cold is here. Great job Deneen of painting a clear picture.
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Date: 10/29/2008 5:49:00 AM
Yes, gorgeous. If only they could stay longer. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/29/2008 4:48:00 AM
Colorful image, Deneen. Haiku is so sensitive. Love, daver
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Date: 10/28/2008 9:22:00 PM
Deneen A beautiful fall embrace that doesn't want to let go.... Seasons seems to come and go so fast don't they! Maybe it's because I'm getting older ha! Take care hun Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 10/28/2008 7:48:00 PM
Hi... I feel the same way... nice haiku.. constance
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Date: 10/28/2008 6:29:00 PM
I love the title with it's double meaning! A great haiku! :) Carrie
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Date: 10/28/2008 6:18:00 PM
Deneen lovely theme and well done too! Laura :)
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