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Sorrow's Silent Symphony

O never say that I was false of heart, With all my or dour, I kept you apart. Sometimes too bright the belief shines- And every fair from fair sometime declines. Your beauty glows discripted by a spring, Of your beautiful chronicles did I sing. Promises that I made wasn't a humdrum, It was my covet to build for thee a chrysanthemum. An year ago, I made you have this wine, Decorated with mosaics , for thee my Valentine. An aspire to spend with you the rest of my life's way, So I assured you to make you my heart- taking an oath in the ST.Valentine's Day. Days passed with all wispy events, Soon I realized it lacked your lovable comments. Soon the day came near, When I promised to have you dear. My life couldn't support your parting's weight, Now at the last gasp of love's latest breath. In my failing pulse , my passion speechless lies, On my death bed , I admire you closing up my eyes. Wheres o'er I'm below or else above you, Wheres o'er you're , my heart shall truly love you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/13/2012 3:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Vishal! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/12/2012 4:12:00 PM
Yes it seems some of us are in maudlin moods! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/12/2012 1:29:00 PM
Congrats Vishal on your win.A sentimental write.
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Date: 3/12/2012 12:06:00 PM
Vishal congrats on your win..David
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Date: 3/12/2012 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Missing" contest Vishal. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:08:00 AM
congrats Vishal on a wonderful win for this excellent write for Missing luv..
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! nice use of dramatic monologue/romanticism :)
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