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Leave By dquering Am I looking to hard To see whats in front of me Life is so scarred With too many penalties Please give me enough strength to swim Though I want drown See the goddess within Screaming so loud I deserve better In fact, the best My thoughts in black and white Never lay to rest In my head, it is constant War, battle,fight I hate to think of it With no resolution in sight Maybe I deserve this Maybe I did something wrong This feeling I can't dismiss Of being dragged along Why am I here? Better yet, why are you? This nonsense,I can't steer And no longer choose to You choose your fate as I choose mine In this misery,I can no longer wait You are all out of time You will not bring me down Not to your level I stand on strong,loving,compassionate ground I am God, and you, Devil

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/11/2009 9:35:00 PM
I love a woman that can speak her mind ... this ones awesome ... congrates on being featured ... kind regards Jayne x x
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Date: 9/11/2009 5:54:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 9/8/2009 5:42:00 PM
Dawn - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj
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Date: 9/8/2009 12:38:00 PM
Dawn, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 9/7/2009 3:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/7/2009 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations, Dawn, on having your poem featured this week. Keep those words flowing. Big Smile, Dane Ann
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Date: 9/7/2009 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Dawn. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2009 3:45:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Dawn. Excellent writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2009 5:49:00 PM
A little both? Lol, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 9/2/2009 12:30:00 PM
Interesting take. Sara
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