Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

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Learn Well From a Natural Tell Nursery Rhyme

With a tweet and twiddle,
something sweet and little,
a birdie tells you to be wise
and never tell whopping lies.

Learn well from a natural tell.
Buzzing hives will honey swell.
Dangerous queens and wingers.
Avoid lovely-lively stingers!

Be wise, not afraid of the night.
bright as stars and super-moonlight.
The owl lifts you when your down-low,
woot-woots as bravo-brave you grow.

3/17/2021
I guess I just missed entering!

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Darlene De Beaulieu March 17, 2021 at 11:08 AM Hello Kim, this would win a contest for sure. Try again. enjoy your day my friend. hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu March 18, 2021 at 9:54 AM Hello Kim, You are welcome my friend. enjoy your day . Hugs. Kim Rodrigues March 17, 2021 at 6:19 PM Thank you, Darlene! :)

Victor Buhagiar March 17, 2021 at 10:19 AM Don't worry Kim. I bet there will be another contest on the subject. Kim Rodrigues March 17, 2021 at 6:19 PM Could be :) Thank you, Victor!

L Milton Hankins March 17, 2021 at 8:22 AM Kim, you might want to make one small correction. "when your down-low" should be "when you're down-low." Loved your poem, and so sorry you missed the contest. Kim Rodrigues March 17, 2021 at 8:58 AM Down-low here is more meant to describe a child. :)