Learn Well From a Natural Tell Nursery Rhyme

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With a tweet and twiddle, something sweet and little, a birdie tells you to be wise and never tell whopping lies. Learn well from a natural tell. Buzzing hives will honey swell. Dangerous queens and wingers. Avoid lovely-lively stingers! Be wise, not afraid of the night. bright as stars and super-moonlight. The owl lifts you when your down-low, woot-woots as bravo-brave you grow. 3/17/2021 I guess I just missed entering!

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/17/2021 11:08:00 AM

Hello Kim, this would win a contest for sure. Try again. enjoy your day my friend. hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/18/2021 9:54:00 AM

Hello Kim, You are welcome my friend. enjoy your day . Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2021 6:19:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene! :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/17/2021 10:19:00 AM

Don't worry Kim. I bet there will be another contest on the subject.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2021 6:19:00 PM

Could be :) Thank you, Victor!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/17/2021 8:22:00 AM

Kim, you might want to make one small correction. "when your down-low" should be "when you're down-low." Loved your poem, and so sorry you missed the contest.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2021 8:58:00 AM

Down-low here is more meant to describe a child. :)