leaning tower of Giza

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Poetic Form: Senryu
Inspired: 2023 December 09
Image: The Inverted Pyramid by Shifting Vibration

The Inverted Pyramid: Changing our Social Structure – Shifting Vibration

Pisa's draftsman born in Egypt planned Pyramids ~~will be inverted

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Joe Maverick

Date: 12/10/2023 2:25:00 PM

Well get a pisa you Hilo.' And no you are not Allowed to be in charge of apple carts.' The mind boggles.'

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/10/2023 2:39:00 PM

Pisa wanes for me -- apple carts wanes/imports, the mind/exports, glad for the drop + 'tis our winter

Silent One

Date: 12/10/2023 7:29:00 AM

Lol... great sense of poetic humour.. Hilo my homie..

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/10/2023 7:45:00 AM

Yep, Silent One. I came across this pic online and I couldn't just let it go unnoticed, my friend, thanks again. Aloha, William