Leak

L E A K And you fixed its shaft for how many times now? Would this be the last? Sedating me with that old familiar distinctive tread of your absence, a tear escaped.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/19/2013 1:51:00 PM

Greg, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda

Daver Austin

Date: 5/18/2013 12:31:00 PM

"Sedating me...with your absence." Love it. Like your style and your imagination. Congrats on the selection. daver

Skat A

Date: 4/26/2013 8:03:00 PM

Greg, ;-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2013 9:02:00 AM

about your poem: I feel tissues coming on. A very fine and sad elegy, this has been a very interesting poem to read this morning....xox~Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2013 9:00:00 AM

Good morning, Greg "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"