Leafless Elm

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                          leafless elm
 
                dresses in shimmering frost

                        rhinestone tiera







For Charles Henderson's Haiku Contest:
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Radke Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 7:56 PM
Oh, I can see this! Perfect imagery. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Very well deserved. Love, Deb
Brown Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 4:16 AM
Congratulations Carrie for the win in Charles Henderson's contest "haiku vs senyru". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 10:23 PM
Wonderful, Carrie. a very well deserved win. Luv, Andrea
Roberts Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 5:23 PM
wonderful imagery , congrats on your win in the contest
Guzzi Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 2:43 PM
I love when the trees are glaced with ice! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 10:24 AM
how descritouev this one can be, carrie.. BEST CONGRATS in the contest..: huggs, nette
Freeman Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 9:42 AM
Carrie, way to go girl! "Congratulations on your beautiful presentation, Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 9:16 AM
Incredible metaphor, Carrie! Congratulations on your win in the contest with this stunning haiku. Love, Carolyn
Calhoun Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 8:51 AM
Hi Carrie - Congratulations on your WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC
Sweetheart Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 6:43 AM
Congrats Carrie on your super win in the haiku vs. senryu contest... awesome win luv..
Knop Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 6:48 AM
Liked much the read of your entry, Carrie! And best of luck in Charles' contest. Thank you also for your kind comments! Have a great time!...Gert
Sweetheart Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 5:50 AM
Perfect entry Carrie as it is so full of the imagery and expression Charles is looking for .. good luck in the contest with luv..
Mannan Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 4:58 AM
Wow carrie. The image is a super one. All the best for the contest.
Horsman Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 8:29 PM
Wonderful Haiku Carrie, good luck in contest. Harry
Pettit Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 7:46 PM
A good winter haiku I believe Charles will like.
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