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Leaf Falling

In stormy backwoods Windy wail in huff 'n puff Thus, no leaves rustling Tumbling to the drizzle ground Desolate leaf settle down

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/6/2017 5:59:00 AM
A vivid tanka, true to form and vivid with detail. Well done. JH
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Daniel Miltz
Date: 2/6/2017 6:13:00 PM
thank you, john...i love the tanka format..have to write more of 'em.

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