Leaf Falling

In stormy backwoods
Windy wail in huff 'n puff
Thus, no leaves rustling
Tumbling to the drizzle ground 
Desolate leaf settle down
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Herlihy Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 5:59 AM
A vivid tanka, true to form and vivid with detail. Well done. JH
Miltz Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 6:13 PM
thank you, john...i love the tanka format..have to write more of 'em.
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