Leading To Dismay

My thoughts are Impregnable, I'm feeling like an outcast & its 
In breakable, the walls clashing down my surroundings 
feeling hopelessly bitter.

I'm drastically overwhelmed with my heavy burden of questioning 
my own fails. I have fallen down of my own pride that keeps me from
reaching greatness, its like the stars who are connected bringing
faithfulness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 12:42 PM
Hi Charlie, this such a deep powerful write! Thank you for sharing this gem which I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Warmest regards.
Sanjuan Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Thank so much! I'll keep writing. Hope you keep reading, & Thanks a Bunch!
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