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Leading To Dismay

My thoughts are Impregnable, I'm feeling like an outcast & its In breakable, the walls clashing down my surroundings feeling hopelessly bitter. I'm drastically overwhelmed with my heavy burden of questioning my own fails. I have fallen down of my own pride that keeps me from reaching greatness, its like the stars who are connected bringing faithfulness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/26/2014 12:42:00 PM
Hi Charlie, this such a deep powerful write! Thank you for sharing this gem which I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Warmest regards.
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Charlie Sanjuan
Date: 6/26/2014 3:46:00 PM
Thank so much! I'll keep writing. Hope you keep reading, & Thanks a Bunch!

Book: Shattered Sighs