Lead Balloons

One couple of days, ninth week of May
two clumsy elephants danced ballet;
they were so weightless they tied it down;
the four in tutus, and one in gown.
Nine ancient young men, both cut the rope
to float away here, and land in hope.
A sober judge while out for a drink,
who did not see them, said they were pink!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 6:21 PM
Love that last line! Love it all!
Miller Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 7:37 AM
Thank you Kim, it was a fun challenge
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 5:54 PM
nicely done for the contest...catchy poem. Liked it
Miller Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 7:38 AM
Hi Sara, yes I had fun with this one
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