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Lazy Summer day

A dawn makes a promise new love songs, sing the chirping birds soft aurora opens morn door wet soft grass blades stick on shoe. Fine lazy day, why undo? dewed blooms whisper tender words my heart wants to listen more enjoying these moments few. Drunk on nature, I get high gentle, fresh breeze, feels so good worries get all cast away time seems to be on slow run. Going out today, far cry party barbecue, I would friends are invited too, hey! day so begun, is well done. 9.6.2020 Written 4 stanzas. Similarity of end words of respective lines of first and second stanza and then third and fourth stanza attempted.

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Date: 6/20/2020 7:05:00 AM
Nicely Composed. Congrats to win.4T6
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/20/2020 7:08:00 AM
Thanks Anisha. Grateful for your appreciation. Mohan
Date: 6/17/2020 2:37:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Mohan :)
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/20/2020 3:06:00 AM
Aditi. Thanx.
Date: 6/16/2020 2:49:00 PM
Congrats Mohan on your win!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/16/2020 11:18:00 PM
Thanks LJ.
Date: 6/10/2020 4:14:00 PM
I picture this as a day when summer fades and monsoon approaches with the dew and fresh fragrance of leaves. A lot of days since Barbecue has been visited now :D Best wishes for the contest :)
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/15/2020 2:51:00 AM
Aditi, thanx for your liking. After lockdown opens properly, a barbecue party is due. Mohan
Date: 6/10/2020 10:44:00 AM
Love your comparison of barbeque to a day 'well done.' Stay drunk on nature, my friend. Stylish write! Best always, Gershon
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/15/2020 2:53:00 AM
GW, thanx for appreciating. It is satisfying to be with friends and partying in your lawns. Mohan
Date: 6/9/2020 7:40:00 PM
Sounds like a wonderful, summer day, Mohan! I enjoyed the beauty of your lazy day...hugs, Rhonda xx
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/15/2020 2:55:00 AM
Rhonda, summer can be fun, esp. when nothing on the to do list. Hope you also hv fun in vacations. Hugs. Mohan