Lazy Summer Day

A dawn makes a promise new
love songs, sing the chirping birds
soft aurora opens morn door
wet soft grass blades stick on shoe.

Fine lazy day,  why undo?
dewed blooms whisper tender words
my heart wants to listen more
enjoying these moments few.

Drunk on nature, I get high
gentle, fresh breeze, feels so good
worries get all cast away
time seems to be on slow run.

Going out today, far cry
party barbecue, I would
friends are invited too, hey!
day so begun, is well done.


9.6.2020
Written 4 stanzas. Similarity of end words of respective lines of first and second stanza and then third and fourth stanza attempted.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dutta Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 7:05 AM
Nicely Composed. Congrats to win.4T6
Chutani Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 7:08 AM
Thanks Anisha. Grateful for your appreciation. Mohan
Mishra Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 2:37 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Mohan :)
Chutani Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 3:06 AM
Aditi. Thanx.
Carber Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 2:49 PM
Congrats Mohan on your win!
Chutani Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 11:18 PM
Thanks LJ.
Mishra Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 4:14 PM
I picture this as a day when summer fades and monsoon approaches with the dew and fresh fragrance of leaves. A lot of days since Barbecue has been visited now :D Best wishes for the contest :)
Chutani Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 2:51 AM
Aditi, thanx for your liking. After lockdown opens properly, a barbecue party is due. Mohan
Wolf Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 10:44 AM
Love your comparison of barbeque to a day 'well done.' Stay drunk on nature, my friend. Stylish write! Best always, Gershon
Chutani Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 2:53 AM
GW, thanx for appreciating. It is satisfying to be with friends and partying in your lawns. Mohan
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June 9, 2020 at 7:40 PM
Sounds like a wonderful, summer day, Mohan! I enjoyed the beauty of your lazy day...hugs, Rhonda xx
Chutani Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 2:55 AM
Rhonda, summer can be fun, esp. when nothing on the to do list. Hope you also hv fun in vacations. Hugs. Mohan
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