Lazy River

willows in symmetry 
ripples in crowfoot 
swan goes with the flow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Sambourne Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 11:39 AM
Symmetry in nature with willows, swan, water all undulating. Remarkably vivid Haiku. Cheers Brian
Rees Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 12:31 PM
So pleased at how you’ve read this, Brian. Best wishes, Peter.
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 8:39 AM
- A beautiful sight, Peter ... thank you :) -
Rees Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 12:29 PM
Thanks Sunshine for your kind comment
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