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Lazy River

willows in symmetry ripples in crowfoot swan goes with the flow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 3/22/2023 11:39:00 AM
Symmetry in nature with willows, swan, water all undulating. Remarkably vivid Haiku. Cheers Brian
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Peter Rees
Date: 3/23/2023 12:31:00 PM
So pleased at how you’ve read this, Brian. Best wishes, Peter.
Date: 3/14/2023 8:43:00 AM
Very soothing
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Peter Rees
Date: 3/23/2023 12:30:00 PM
Thanks DD . So glad you’re soothed. Best wishes, Peter
Date: 3/14/2023 8:39:00 AM
- A beautiful sight, Peter ... thank you :) -
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Peter Rees
Date: 3/23/2023 12:29:00 PM
Thanks Sunshine for your kind comment

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