Lazy River

it's the end of Summer
so the river level is down.
You can walk straight across it now
with little risk that you'll drown.

Right now it's a lazy river
meandering to the sea
but come the early Spring
a raging river it'll once more be.

In Summer months we swim there
creating memories with friends.
Living our very best lives,
hoping it never ends.

But today as Summer wanes
and Fall is on the way
I'll walk across the river and
enjoy this peaceful day.

I am getting older so
it may be the last time for me
to wander across the river
as it slips out to the sea.




26/08/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Johnson Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 9:13 AM
We are all getting older, Francine and that is why I don't do as much writing. This poem is similar to one I have posted. I enjoyed it.
Staton Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 8:32 PM
Thank you for such a vivid poem. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Dutta Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 10:38 AM
Nice title. I love to cross a lazy river by walk. But I got rare chances. Love.
Theraven Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 3:50 PM
Francine, I enjoyed the poem with a lazy river walk. Reminds me of Tom Sawyer & Huckleberry Finn. -Richard
Devonshire Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 1:11 PM
Francine, I hope you get to "walk" across the river many more times! Just stay young at heart. Thank you for sharing this journey, my friend. I felt like I was walking with you... Hugs, Carolyn
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August 27, 2020 at 11:39 AM
Who cares? Enjoy today and let tomorrow be someone else's worry! Aloha! Rico
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