Lazy June Moon

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Marvelous, matchless, magical, moonlit midnight, With a superabundance of sparkly, summery stars, Peacefully placid, pure and prettily plummy, Radiantly rich, rhapsody resplendent rapture! Fragrant flowers frolic freely in your fervence, Eye-catching and exquisite in their exuberance, Bouncing blissfully in breezy, blooming ballet. Inexhaustible and intoxicating and intriguing, Dazzling and delightful, and doubtlessly dreamy.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 4/7/2020 9:17:00 PM

Evelyn, your alliteration poem is quite alluring! I enjoyed its jaunty spirit so much. I especially loved 'prettily plummy' and 'doubtlessly dreamy'- so evocative and unique. And I really loved this line 'Fragrant flowers frolic freely in your fervence,' - such lovely rhythm and expressive imagery! Beautiful poetry! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/7/2020 10:22:00 PM

I am so glad you found pleasure in my poem, Susan. Thank you for taking the time to tell me so. Your spirit lifting words thrill my heart. Thank you so much, and my best and warmest wishes to you, as well. :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/7/2020 2:41:00 AM

I am excited and enthusiastic about your enticing exuberant exciting alliterative poem, Evelyn.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/7/2020 12:23:00 PM

Fantastic! This is my first foray into this fascinating form, and so far, I find it to be fun. Thanks for a fine and fulfilling comment.