Lazy Haikus #1,042-1,045

Semi-sleepwalking
Ev'ry day is déjà vu
When my love's adrift

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Nashville to Kentucky
The state line divides my heart
So where lies my home?

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The journey stretches
I'm like Kerouac, on the road
Or Frost, miles to go...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 9:03 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Jonathan. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 10:20 AM
Great expressiveness and descriptiveness in these Haiku. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Palli Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 9:54 AM
Good title!
Gorelick Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 9:38 AM
I like the last one especially.. bg
Gorelick Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 9:38 AM
I like the last one especially.. bg
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