Lazy Day

nostalgic daydream leaves hitchhike on playful wind untrained rake at rest 8/21/2021

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/24/2021 11:30:00 AM

There is a time and place for everything in life and you rightly have put your rake to rest and enjoying nature. Hugs and blessings Eve, Jennifer.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/23/2021 11:18:00 PM

'Hitchhike' - Beautifully used. Congratulations on your win!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/22/2021 8:15:00 PM

It's a very happy and tranquil scene you've created. Beautiful imagery.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/22/2021 8:15:00 PM

'untrained rake' -- I like your 'angle' on this one, Eve. Picture-perfect. Happy Work-Week to you, Gershon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2021 12:34:00 PM

I love the imagery of this one!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/22/2021 2:23:00 AM

This is very original Loved it. Hugs.