Lazy Day

nostalgic daydream
leaves hitchhike on playful wind
untrained rake at rest

8/21/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Proxenos Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 11:30 AM
There is a time and place for everything in life and you rightly have put your rake to rest and enjoying nature. Hugs and blessings Eve, Jennifer.
Alex Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 11:18 PM
'Hitchhike' - Beautifully used. Congratulations on your win!
Wolf Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 8:15 PM
'untrained rake' -- I like your 'angle' on this one, Eve. Picture-perfect. Happy Work-Week to you, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 8:15 PM
It's a very happy and tranquil scene you've created. Beautiful imagery.
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 12:34 PM
I love the imagery of this one!
Buhagiar Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 2:23 AM
This is very original Loved it. Hugs.
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