Lazy

What is it with you Constantly want me to do Things you never do

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/4/2016 1:35:00 PM

Excellent haiku with a powerful punch! Well done, Naddy! Pandita

Naddy Zahari
Date: 2/4/2016 6:36:00 PM

Thanks Pandita, you are so kind! <3

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 2/2/2016 9:18:00 AM

This is an ageless truism. Enjoyed. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M

Naddy Zahari
Date: 2/2/2016 7:47:00 PM

I am glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for your warm wishes, Maurice :D

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/25/2016 1:57:00 AM

Dear Naddy I'm feeling you on this one agree, I have two people here that this work applies too, understand this completely, nice work, cheri

Naddy Zahari
Date: 2/2/2016 3:39:00 AM

I'm glad you can relate!

Funom Makama

Date: 1/23/2016 10:47:00 AM

WOW! Why has no comment pain this page? Few lines with a huge message. Fantastic!! Beyond fantastic... Welcome to poetrysoup dear poet.

Naddy Zahari
Date: 1/23/2016 9:56:00 PM

Thank you for dropping by Funom. I appreciate it so much!