Lazy

Radiant sun so bright in azure skies Oh truly this day is beautiful As I bake in the warmth, my hand shading my eyes Forgotten, all thoughts of being dutiful YOUR BEST FOUR-LINE LIGHT VERSE, NO. 2 Poetry Contest 21.09.21

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Harry Horsman

Date: 10/17/2021 1:19:00 AM

A day of relaxation and to write lovely poetry, as this is! Harry

Melody Wiggett
Date: 10/19/2021 8:56:00 AM

:) thank you Harry :)

John Fleming

Date: 10/11/2021 11:38:00 PM

An appealing little poem. That one word, "dutiful" lends itself to all manner of assumptions...intriguing choice of word. Best regards! :) john

Melody Wiggett
Date: 10/19/2021 8:56:00 AM

:) thanks John :)