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Lay’s

The contents long consumed, discarded; the packet stirred in the gentle breeze before rising, dancing, escaping; an ersatz yellow-red autumn leaf; wind chaser that will live forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 2/4/2024 10:14:00 PM
There is something to be said for biodegradable material. I wonder if your packet will ever rival nature's Autumn leaves in splendor. It will probably last longer but the sun will probably fade its bright color. See now you have got me thinking about an empty packet! Your poems have a magnet force. I enjoyed.
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Terry Miller
Date: 2/6/2024 8:06:00 AM
You are too kind Wen, it was something I saw which just stuck in my head.

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