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Layla and Majnun

Flower of love bloomed in dunes of desert Besotted Layla carried in niche of her heart It withered in the tribal Arabian harsh summer Unrequited virgin love went to the grave with her. Deranged Majnun wandered in love’s wasteland Etched the requiem of broken heart on desert sand With the parched wind before his last breath was gone He became hers, his poem engraved on her gravestone. January 12, 2019

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/12/2019 6:47:00 PM

A poignant write, Subimal. Congrats on your top win.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/13/2019 1:15:00 AM

Many thanks, Line.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/12/2019 3:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Subimal. hugs Eve ~`*

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/13/2019 1:15:00 AM

Thank you, Eve.

Debjani Mitra

Date: 1/19/2019 9:24:00 PM

What a gorgeous composition.. Wish your writing to be as immortal as the legendary love story

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/13/2019 1:15:00 AM

Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/19/2019 5:33:00 PM

Hello Subimal Singa-Roy, you did a great job on this sad poem. Nice to meet you. Have a nice evening my friend. Welcome to Poetry Soup.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/13/2019 1:14:00 AM

Thank you, Darlene for your nice comments, much appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/19/2019 9:36:00 AM

What a sad ending submimal, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/13/2019 1:14:00 AM

Thank you, Jan.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2019 5:55:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work. Sara

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/13/2019 1:13:00 AM

Many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/16/2019 10:00:00 PM

Congrats!

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/13/2019 1:13:00 AM

Thanks, Kim.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/16/2019 3:36:00 PM

Your lovely story of these starcrossed loves...never lovers, is so sad Subimal. Poetically related brilliantly with your talented pen. Congratulations on your win! : )

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/13/2019 1:12:00 AM

Thank you, Connie for your nice comments, much appreciated.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/16/2019 2:10:00 PM

Nicely written, Subimal. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/13/2019 1:12:00 AM

Many thanks, Carolyn.