Laura Mckenzie Poet Rhyme

Laying In the Arms of a Timeless Treasure

Consciousness flows so soft and serene 
Together, weaving a lovers dream, 

Stillness, in utter fever, 
Making me a believer 
 
Rhythms pulse through us in a dance
In a lover’s gaze, high above the clouds, floating in a trance

Fused hearts of forever kisses 
Sewing thoughts in eternal reminiscence 

Gentle caresses tediously moves unfold  
Breathless, a peaceful hush covers our mold 

Into the arms of this soothing place 
The look of deep affection on your face

Wrapped in the colors that will keep like wine 
A blushing of your lips on mine 

Time knows no measure 
In this moment of us, together

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Ed Coet November 17, 2008 at 9:00 AM I enjoyed this poem. I would like for our editorial board to have the opportunity to consider it for Blue Fog Journal’s “Contemporary Romantic Love Poems” anthology. If you are interested please review the submission guidelines at the following link: http://bluefogjournal.com/call-for-submission/. Sincerely, ED COET Editor, Blue Fog Journal

Deneen White November 8, 2008 at 5:53 PM what a simple but elegant write of love passion and happiness, hope you are well, take care D-ncye

Sharon Winter November 7, 2008 at 1:41 PM Ooooh Laura, breathtakingly beautiful. You captured it so well. It is difficult to put into words these personal places we are taken to, but there is no denying your inspiration of an amazing experience. Love, Shar

Nigel Fawcett November 7, 2008 at 10:09 AM I really enjoyed this romantic write Laura. Thanks for your comment on Hypocrisy. Not the sort of thing I usually write! I was one of the six pairs of eyes denied a grandfather. Love, Nigel