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Laying In the Arms of a Timeless Treasure

Consciousness flows so soft and serene Together, weaving a lovers dream, Stillness, in utter fever, Making me a believer Rhythms pulse through us in a dance In a lover’s gaze, high above the clouds, floating in a trance Fused hearts of forever kisses Sewing thoughts in eternal reminiscence Gentle caresses tediously moves unfold Breathless, a peaceful hush covers our mold Into the arms of this soothing place The look of deep affection on your face Wrapped in the colors that will keep like wine A blushing of your lips on mine Time knows no measure In this moment of us, together

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/17/2008 9:00:00 AM
I enjoyed this poem. I would like for our editorial board to have the opportunity to consider it for Blue Fog Journal’s “Contemporary Romantic Love Poems” anthology. If you are interested please review the submission guidelines at the following link: http://bluefogjournal.com/call-for-submission/. Sincerely, ED COET Editor, Blue Fog Journal
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Date: 11/8/2008 5:53:00 PM
what a simple but elegant write of love passion and happiness, hope you are well, take care D-ncye
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Date: 11/7/2008 1:41:00 PM
Ooooh Laura, breathtakingly beautiful. You captured it so well. It is difficult to put into words these personal places we are taken to, but there is no denying your inspiration of an amazing experience. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/7/2008 10:09:00 AM
I really enjoyed this romantic write Laura. Thanks for your comment on Hypocrisy. Not the sort of thing I usually write! I was one of the six pairs of eyes denied a grandfather. Love, Nigel
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