Laying In My Bed

Im laying in my bed
Staring at the ceiling
Looking at the lines
From the blinds
Derived from outside
Lights through my window
Into my room
And though i cant sleep
I remain in wait
While a state of awake
Permeates my minds eye
And the darkness
Envelops me whole
But the sounds of
The night remain
My clock ticks
My clock tocks
The seconds turn
The minutes burn
The fan shakes
The blades spin
My heart beats
My mind races
My eyes swell
Im growing....
Im living....
Im thinking....
Im dying inside.
I am awake.
Yet i am alive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/2/2018 9:48:00 AM
Wow, beautiful Criss keep it up
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Date: 10/31/2018 4:22:00 AM
written lovely the graph of lonely living life in poetic diction /// lovely expression
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Date: 9/30/2015 8:25:00 AM
I love reading poems like this one. Good work.
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Date: 9/29/2015 12:04:00 PM
Night time is sometimes a hard time. Nice write my friend. God Bless. D.
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Date: 9/27/2015 4:44:00 PM
Really awesome words , good luck my friend and keep up the great work on. Xoxo
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Date: 9/27/2015 4:07:00 PM
We all have those times. I know that I do . Good reading. Keep up the good work of writing.
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