Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Layers of Me

I sit naked and exposed...
                                              The sky my ceiling to write and pose...
                                           Sprinkled pieces fall and stick to my soul...
                                They are fragments of my dreams that drop and unfold...
                                   I stand with arms raised touching the layers of me...
                                       And then sit and write as my Poetry flows free...

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Gwendolen Song December 22, 2011 at 3:44 PM This is extraordinary!! Love the sprinkled pieces that fall and stick to your soul!! This is my dream....to write poetry like this, Michael. The Layers of YOu are wonderful!! This will be on the first page of your next book!! Fragments of My Dreams~by Michael Falotico! lol. Gwendolen

Dinda Minardi December 22, 2011 at 9:30 AM I love this!!! Congratulations on the win :) loved eeach line, Michael.

Debbie Guzzi December 20, 2011 at 10:22 AM I really like this one Mike..one suggestion on the last line ..perhaps stop at Poetry. BIG Congrad's Happy Holy Days

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 20, 2011 at 2:18 AM Smashing Congratulations x

John Freeman December 19, 2011 at 5:33 PM What great poetry is made of Michael, Yours is has a uniqueness of it's own. Congratulations on your top place. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich December 19, 2011 at 3:23 PM Sounds like yoga for poetry, Michael. REally cool. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest.

Ralph Taylor December 19, 2011 at 11:51 AM Congrats, Mike. Great job. Nice going. Happy Holidays to you and yours. Ralph

Jon Arno December 19, 2011 at 6:44 AM Congratulations on your win in the Sixes And Sevens contest :)

Carol Sunshine Brown December 19, 2011 at 6:20 AM Congratulations on your super win in Brian's "Sixes And Sevens" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Reneice Mowatt December 18, 2011 at 1:37 PM Now this is DEEP! like it :-) S>S>S> short, sweet and spicy!

Wilma Neels December 18, 2011 at 8:01 AM hehe, I had to laugh at Catie's comment ;) enjoyed your write filled with layers ;) love Wilma