Layered Silence

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Layered silence wherein the mists slowly clear, brings into our cognition, God's sublime light but if we cling, not flow, these blessings held dear as with all desires, soon disappears from sight, for whenever we lend the ego our ear, consciousness contracts, stifling our heart's delight. Once we vaporise, ceasing to weigh and size, nonchalant stance beholds each breath in surprise. 30-October-2022

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Sand Blown

Date: 10/30/2022 4:31:00 PM

...your titles....wowza...your layered sigh lent....a depth to the scene seen......... stan sand

Sand Blown
Date: 10/31/2022 3:57:00 PM

...an observers 4d reality is patterned chaotics.....but, an observer can percieve self as following chaotics irrational patterns of pi, phi, e, etc. of consistency

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/30/2022 5:46:00 PM

How still is our stillness?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2022 10:30:00 AM

Really nice one, unseeking seeker.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/30/2022 5:46:00 PM

Thanks Andrea!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/30/2022 12:21:00 AM

Loving God means being one with Him.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/30/2022 3:55:00 AM

Yes. Beyond symbols. Once we vaporise, luminous soul presence and He are one