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Layered Pain

Deep tunnel of wound gripping bored deep in sensual strata surface sheared in excruciating trauma, sink to petrified depth of unfeeling...stillness at benumbed bottom of layered pain...placid. May 4, 2019

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Date: 5/4/2019 3:20:00 AM
"excruciating trauma" and "petrified depth of unfeeling" - these terms describe pain in a profoundly deep way, my friend. Well done!
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