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I ought to lie on the lawn and rest my head. I feel revitalized as the cold breeze spread. Watch for wildlife, but follow your nose. Relish the lush vegetation or a budding rose. I wish I had my toys out to savor the grass. Be respectful, and don't be crass. Engage with people of every walk and class. Anyone can be a side of the upper brass. Sustain your feet grounded, continue to survive, and be surrounded. The effects of loneliness can kill. It does not allow you to develop your skill. Grass has complete control over its time. Throughout the day, swaying with sublime Weep for the frame of a divided landscape. Buds extend their arms across vacant shapes. With seeds and bees, sprout a grassland. A flower and buzzing bees form a band. You will be able to survive the cool breeze. Petals of living buds are still on the trees. I have spread out my quilt on the lawn, in the shade of a scenic willow tree. Admiring its slender, green leaves at dawn. Draws down on me and the soil around me. Love will blossom as a tender seed, even if the earth is tainted with weed. Love will proceed until it finds a home. In one's inner depths, akin to bliss foam.
Written: March 19, 2023 In The Grass Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anthony Biaanco

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Date: 6/5/2023 8:03:00 AM
Beautiful imagery! Amazing! Congratulations on the HM
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Date: 5/30/2023 1:44:00 PM
Your grasses' poem springs alive with vibrancy with the life within. Congratulations Lasaad! Be well. Brian
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Date: 5/30/2023 1:04:00 PM
Sotto, a wonderfully written poem, I love it, well done!
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Date: 5/30/2023 9:59:00 AM
Nice description of your lawn. Nicely penned.
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Date: 3/20/2023 7:06:00 AM
What a beautiful scene, what a breathtaking lawn, no wonder you lay down on the green green grass under the shade of a tree, to take in the beauty and wholesomeness that surrounded you - a terrific write Lasaad, as are all your poems. Blessings, Jennifer.
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